She came rushing in, or though it seemed to me,
disbelief that this colourful Lady with her cloak of reds and golds
had already arrived, when I glanced from my window.
I must have been looking the other way!
but then we don’t count the days pursuing more important matters now…
As the relentless stricken battle appears once more on the horizon,
had she come to distract my mind or bring colours to my heart?
This feckless stunning Lady who sheds her clothes
and scatters them where she will,
like drops of tears in a template of sadness perhaps?
A powerful change of authority as restless and now incipient to decay.
Old roses fade and fall like shattered fragments of glass
from a precious mirror,
the hedgerows become bare, no more luscious berries
but still holding onto their thin strips of life.
Leaves, could they ever be more beautiful?
turning to deep maroons and burnished, glinting, jewelled colours.
Conkers appearing from their secret shells to fall in copper splendour
from the impressive stately Horse Chestnut trees.
We arrived, like we had just opened our eyes.
Another Autumn! who would have believed we would see this majestic
Lady together, dumbstruck once more at her beauty
but belligerently waging war on staying in our perfect peaceful Summer…
not for us, the rushing of time…
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24 September, 2009
Autumn Lady by Susie Hemingway
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Hi Susie;
Loved your poem and the photos.
"This feckless stunning Lady who sheds her clothes
and scatters them where she will,
like drops of tears..." Great line!
My best to you and Hamada.
Even in a season that seems to want to hurry change, we must hold tightly to all the beautiful moments in it.
May you have many many beautiful moments to come.
Thank you for your gift of the pleasant reminder that Autumn is where colors are most vivid before they disappear. I guess being a hopeless romantic I want them to linger forever.
Minna Van Stone.
We need those distractions you wrote of – even if they only last for a season. What a beautiful analogy. Hopefully, that horizon is further away then you think. Like John, I too liked the same line – it portrays quite a provocative image! You are so very clever. What a lovely gateway at Hemingway – a very fitting entry to where such beautiful poetry is conceived
Oh, yes, autumn is here and I am a happy man. My favourite season's arrived!
Greetings from London.
You have made the arrival of my autumn, more beautiful.
xo
i love to arrive at autumn, this is a wonderful vignette...
lovely allusions here
I so love Autumn and so love your beautiful poem, Susie!
Wonderful pictures too!
Thank you!
Margie:)
this is so so beautiful. you've captured the essence of autumn...
"Beautiful poem. Thank you Susie."
I only have one word, Susie: sweet.
Very sweet indeed.
When you get a minute, I posted photos from here earlier today. Local college campus. Not a lot of color yet, but it is starting.
Take care, my friend. Both of you.
I loved reading this, so I read it a dozen times, and will a dozen more because I printed it and posted it on hallowed ground...the front of the refridgerator!
Thanks, Susie, I hope all is well.
Thank you for your compliments. But thank you much more for this lovely word picture of the season. You capture it so perfectly.
autumn seems to arrive much sooner than she did when i was young. now that i am ready to slow down and take in the moments carefully the seasons do not cooperate. this celebration of rich, autumn color, the need to hold on tightly to time as it rushes too guickly forward is so poignant. i understand.
Your poem prompted me to write "Who can stop the sunset?" and gift those precious moments as the sun slips down behind the mountain and sea - caught, but not stopped - to you and your beloved... I love your words that bring the essence of a season or a moment into very sharp focus. Thank you again....
Absolutely beautiful! I have written about you on my blog and posted a link from my blog to your blog. :)
Thank you all so very much for the generous and kind comments entered here on my thoughts of Autumn and for taking the time during your busy days to post them here. May you all enjoy this very beautiful season.
Gorgeous poem about my favourite time of year !
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