I carry thee like the heavy rain drenched leaves cover the precious plants
I carry thee like the mother with soft-fleshed babe in arms
I carry thee on heavy days, when limbs are tired but heart is willing
I carry thee.
I think for you on difficult days when drug filled mind is fuddled and quiet
I think ahead for you with heavy heart filled with anxious thoughts of decisions that must be made
I think of you when struggles to move are hard and bones make creaks and eyes are dulled
I think of you.
I watch for you, I listen to your breathing, when night has fallen and stillness comes
I watch for you with hope you never stumble or fall
I watch for you to make that kiss you love, entirely right at night
I watch for you.
I dream for you that days will pass pain free and be filled with God’s blessings
I dream for you when watching Autumn leaves fall as trees again show their tangled limbs.
I dream for you that you will see the Summer sun, rise across the pastures green once more
I carry thee....
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Photo Courtesy of Janey Johnson Photos: All Rights Reserved
18 October, 2009
"I Carry Thee" - by Susie Hemingway.
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Not only is it a beautiful poem, but also a highly rhythmical one. And poets sometimes forget about the syncopated rhythm that poetry can or does convey. If you speak or understand Spanish, I suggest you give a listen to Misia's version of 'Te Extrano' (I can't do that Spanish consonant on my keyboard, the one with the little hat on top). It is a wondeful song and it echoes your feelings.
Many thanks.
Greetings from London.
Ahh, yes … “I carry thee” … we do, don’t we? Another beautifully written poem from your heart, Susie, and so very poignant for where we find ourselves these days. It is as if you have taken residence with us. Thank you again for sharing your very special gift.
Thank you so much "A Cuban in London" for your kind comments. I am so pleased you enjoyed the rhythm of this poem/prayer. I understand only a little Spanish but have listened to 'Te Extrano' i was unable to find (as yet) Misia's version, but found one by De Armando Manzanero which i have enjoyed immensely. Thank you for pointing me in the right direction of this most beautiful song and for your most constructive critique
Thank you Dear Dianne, We walk the same road don't we. Supporting each other, as our husbands battle against this wretched Multiple Myeloma. Stay strong sweet lady,
my sincere good wishes as always, to you both.
This new prayer/poem is inspiring
Carrying one another - that's what it's all about, isn't it?
Thank you, Susie.
Your poem is so beautiful and heartfelt!
Love it Susie!
Thank you Walt, well your kindness (and Michael M's) has in it's own way, 'carried me through' some rough old times, with your consistant great support.
Thank you.
Marge, I am so flattered with your comment and coming from such a writer as you. Truly a big thank you.
Susie, I wish I had more time this morning .... but will return to read what I know will be amazingly lovely poetry. Take care, both of you.
Minna Van Stone. May the burdens on your heart be weightless. Easy to see the love. Enjoy the joy of the day.
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