Dare I dream of Christmas time
of Robins and of Christmas songs,
or maybe yes? of spring beyond
when I see that journey made
with courage and no other way,
I dare to dream, of walks we'll make
or sitting by that sparkling lake.
Do I think of then and now
can I dream, then just how?
I start to hope that back you'll come,
from heavy heart as joy becomes,
to fill my life again with hope
as slowly as a bud unfolds,
you're stronger now, oh! the hope.
with every day I look at you
to see your heart returning too,
to just believe we have the time
as such happiness unwinds, to form
and shape like seasons do,
the time together, just us two,
dare I dream of Spring beyond?
So hard the journey you have made!
just to see another day,
just to spend the days with me
in quiet 'turquoise' harmony,
dare I dream of then and now
of Robins and of Christmas songs
or maybe yes? of Spring beyond....
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14 comments:
Julian again. I love this poem, well done Susie.
It's a splendid back and forth tale of thoughts,pain and gain. I enjoyed this very much and send my best wishes to you both. John George.
I like it very much and it's express what is inside you for a desire to return the clock backwards. Mark. Cairo. Egypt.
Susie,
When you find your passion in life, great things,happen to you, and because of you.
Your poetry is lovely and a true inspiration. Stay well, stay strong.
Hugs and Blessings BJ from MySpace
Thank you Dear Mark, for your most interesting comments. Say hello to Cairo for me, I long to return once again x
Dear BJ, how kind you are to send such lovely comments. It thrills me to know that you enjoyed this poem. Keep well and happy Love Susie xx
A sweet gentle poem - Micheal
Thank you Mike.
Charles says, still enjoying the poems, this one pleases me very much, best wishes to you both
A simple poem of great undertones and clever use of thoughts keep writing for us. xx
Ben and Frank
Thanks Ben and Frank, for your very nice comments, I send my best wishes to you and all seasons greetings.
What a beautiful inspirational poem. I felt every word you wrote. your words are awesome. I hope all your hopes and dreams do come true. My prayers are with you. Stay safe.... Judy
How kind you are to say such special things about my poems Judy, they are i know, a way for me to deal with this unfolding period of my life, they cleanse my troubled soul and enable me to go on with this fight and the journey for us both. Keep well and happy Judy.
Susie x
Thanks too Charles, nice to hear from you again x
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