Do you remember Paris
so many days ago,
we ran in the rain
me in the highest heels, and
you never letting go,
dodging busy bustling streets,
past the Galerie of Fine Arts
wishing we could buy the shop,
do you remember Paris.
The tiny hotel you'd chosen
with a lift for only one
we squeezed tightly together
leaving our baggage still to come,
we laughed, as we rose to the attic
wiping the rain away,
and in our little shuttered room
we hid ourselves away,
do you remember Paris.
You sent for rolls and coffee
from the cafe just below
and as the lights came on
the room took on a rosy glow,
you say the smell of coffee
takes you back to that little room,
that, high over-stuffed bed,
the faded flowers, in candle gloom,
do you remember Paris.
We mixed the 'Coco' and 'Givenchy'
the hearts so full of love
the heady cognac, just to warm us,
the courtyard full of doves,
it was our Paris, not the Eiffel
or the Champs-Elys'ees
or even the Louvre
just in the latin quarter, a tiny
hotel for two.
Do you remember Paris ? ...
@ Copyright 2007
20 comments:
This was Paris in the spring of 1980
I am very proud to be the first one to write comment on this nice poem with Susie style,very simple words, but with very powerful feelings Susie used to mix both together and create nice and sweet poems,when I read this poem, I remembered Edith Piaff singing and the old streets of Paris, it's strange, Susie has the ability to make you travel to any place just by reading her poems. Mark
So lovely and elegant. Thanks for letting us in on your memories, hope you are doing well Susie.
Love Jewel USA
How Romantic, absolutely lovely
Sally Grieves
Thank you Dear Mark, as always such lovely comments, it makes me so happy to think that I can in some way transport you to a different land, refreshing your memories of other times. I hope Paris is always a happy place for you x
Thank you Dear Jewel - Yes we are still fighting on - trying to make every day a masterpiece. Love Susie
Thank you for your nice comments, Sally, I am so glad you found this poem romantic. Best Wishes Susie
This is the best 'Paris'feeling the place so well Susie, all the best Patrick.
All the best to you Patrick and thank you for your comments
I can see it all, a lovely poem,I hope you guys manage to get through it all. jerry beauer from U.S.
Such a lovely romantic 'Paris' this is a stylish poem and i can see the scene well Jemma.
Love the poem, I have been thinking about you, I do hope you two are okay Connie USA
Beautiful Susie, and certainly nostalgic. When my husband and I were stationed in Europe we visited a place very similar to this. We were military, money was tight, but it's amazing the comfort one can find in a small cramped room when they're with someone they care for. Hope you are well, you two hang close . Hugs BJ
Thank you BJ. I'm so glad you found some memories returning with this poem - It does seem as if I have hit the right spot for quite a few with this one - that thrills me - I send my very best wishes to you and sincerely hope you are quite well again, Susie x
this is charming, romantic and beautifully written, more please,
have read all these poems and they have given me such pleasure. Charles
Have just found your site Susie and I love it, such stories of love. I enjoyed them .
Again another poem with powerful feelings great stuff Noel
Many thanks Jerry, all best wishes to you.
Thank you for your nice comments, Jemma
Thank you Connie ( myspace) for your nice comments
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