In dreams I make you well again
in the quiet of the night
you run with me, in endless flight,
far away in thoughts of long ago
we run on beaches sailing to
deserted islands, strong were the arms
that pulled the boat ashore.,
In dreams I see you there once more.
In dreams I make you well again
your long limbs brown and strong,
the warm breezes puff at our skin
we swim in blue waters
you touching my nose and cheeks,
the droplets of crystal waters
dry with salty streaks,
In dreams the picture never alters,
In dreams I see you there once more.
In dreams I make you well again
to walk the sands with me
you standing tall, with eyes so clear
from El Salam* unto the sea,
to see the lighthouse in the bay
for you to breathe that salty air
for you to brush my long fair hair
In dreams I see you there once more.
In dreams I make you well again
in the quiet velvet of the night
the smile that changed my life
from dusk until the light,
in dreams you dance with me
on islands in deep blue seas,
close your eyes and dream with me
see those 'najoods' that stand like waves
see those golden seas of sand
see the place you held my hand.
*najoods - Sand dunes.
*favourite hotel
@ Copyright 2007
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24 comments:
for me this is the summary of all the love and power of my Susie
A complete and sumptuously sublimily beautiful poem.
Such a romantic poem, it took me with you both. Johnathan Clifford USA
You will make him well again in spirit and in soul
gorgeous work susie.
yours,
jewel
Thank you so much Dear Hamada, and with special thanks to dear Russell, Johnathan, Anonymous, and also to dear jewel for your wonderful comments on this lastest poem. Thank you for taking time from your busy lives to give your kind opinions.
Another lovely piece of work Susie
very powerful, full of romance. Annie Nelson U.S.A
Keep up the great work Susie, we are all reading and hoping for progress for Hamada. Your poems are an inspiration. We love them.
Thank you Annie for your lovely comments, so nice to hear from you again x
Thank you so much Jean, all best wishes to you.
A complete and very fine verse. Full of Love.
Very sweet and romantic poem of a dream that free everyone from what they have in real life, and Susie succed to join and combine the memory with a dream, memory of the passed good times and make her living in that endless dream that she wish she never awakes from that dream and face reality. Mark Cairo.
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Thanks you Francis for your nice comments.
Thank you Dear Mark for your lovely comments as usual. I so value your generous thoughts on my poems and thank you for being such a good friend. Say hello to Cairo for me. 'Dip your toes once in the Nile and you will always return...'
I really find this poem so moving and very romantic - wish I could find love like this.
Thank you Jimmy for your lovely comments - I sincerely hope you find your love- best wishes Susie
A wonderful poem containing a sincere wish in a dream, great stuff Terry Stubbs
Wonderful poem good strong sentiments and very romantic. A gorgeous poem.
Thank you Terry for your lovely comments. Best Wishes to you.
What wonderful comments Kelly thank you. I am so glad you like my poem. Best Wishes to you.
Thank for this superb poem. I can relate to this - Multiple Myeloma Sufferer.
I love this poem. Dreams are our escape from reality for such a short period aren't they? keep the faith, all will be well again Judy. MySpace
Comment from MySpace friend Mags: Once again lovely! your an excellent poet. Such poignant words
Thanks to Mags, Judy (My Space) and Annonymous for your kind comments on "If I Could Dream You Well Again"
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